Sunday, October 25, 2009

Mistakenly Seen

My heart is content,
But inside it rages like a fire.
As I look upon all that time spent,
I realize you are my only desire.


I wait and wait
For a mere response, a reply,
But you don't open your gate,
And I sit alone and cry.

Seeing you every day
With a laugh and a smile.
I wish there was a way
To make it all worthwhile.

But you don't see me the way I wish you would.
Why not??? Oh, I wish you could...

*This is my first sonnet (14-line poem). Sure, I'm no Shakespeare, but tell me what you think =P

2 comments:

Prince of Darkness and Light said...

I quite like this poem. You have a gift. Keep with it, and it could get you places.
-The Prince of Light and Darkness

αlєх said...

I love how it rhymes, very nice.